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Summary of the guidance and defense work of the graduation thesis The light is like an arrow, and the years have no traces. After a period of work, the work has ended. Looking back at the work of this time, the theoretical knowledge and business level have been greatly improved. Write work well. Summarize, learn lessons, and guide future work. In order to make you more simple and convenient to write a work summary, the following is the summary of my elaborate graduation thesis guidance and defense work for reference only. I hope to help everyone.
XX XX month, I undertook the guidance of graduation thesis and graduation practice report of 23 people in the 8th group of Class 0932. The overall process includes four steps: 1. Selection of graduation thesis, and press defense through the question; 2. Writing the first draft of the paper; 3. Amendment from the instructor, improve the paper and submit the dissertation and submit it Two drafts; 4. Follow the paper templates, adjust the format of thesis, further improve the content of the paper, and submit the final draft. 5. Defense . The topic selection of thesis Chat the guidance group and the student list, call the students to select the topic of the paper and the first submission of them for the first time. Understand the preliminary title selection intentions of each group. In order to avoid the same topics, adjust the topic questions similar to the topic, give suggestions, and fine -tune their propositions to make it more in line with the paradigm of thesis. For example, there are two groups of topics "how to become an excellent flight attendant". Some topics are too general, the scope is too large, and there is no targeted. The title is too general, and the second does not meet the paradigm of the paper. Under the guidance, it is adjusted to "the cause and countermeasure study of passenger complaints in aircraft cabin services". After determining the topic selection of each group, further clarify the schedules, framework writing, and data collection of their thesis writing. And collect students' contact information to determine the person in charge of the group to facilitate communication. . Opening question guidance Coffed on the topic, the students are preparing to open the question report, including the strict papers writing process and the outline of the paper. The thesis is rigorous, innovative, and has practical significance for students' future career development. The first time students wrote the paper and were not sure about the framework, there were many problems, such as unclear ideas and confused logic structure. For example: Passenger psychological problems and service path exploration caused by analysis flight delays are simply listed various reasons for flight delays, and there is no in -depth analysis and solution. Therefore, guiding students to change to , The concept and case of flight delay 2. Analysis of the cause of flight delay 3. Features of passenger psychological problems caused by flight delay 4. Service path analysis of flight delay. . The first draft was modified After the question was opened, the members of each group collected and sorted the data, conducted research, and then analyzed, integrated data and data, and started to write the paper. Several important components of the text and references, the summary and the text are the core content. The first draft modification is mainly for the following problems: 1. The writing of the abstract. Students do not know how to refine the summary, often mistakenly use it as an foreword, and ignore the refining of the theme of the full text. 2. The content is thin and the argument is not sufficient. Students' statement is simple, generally comes from theoretical knowledge, while there are few subjective logic ideas, without innovation and in -depth. For example, just give a case, lack of specific analysis of the case. 3. The structure is incomplete. Conclusion, reference and gratitude are the organic components of the paper, but many papers lack these parts. The amendments to the fourth and second drafts After being modified and improved, the students submitted the second draft of the paper, which was corrected to the problems previously pointed out. Framework and content logic are strong. However, there are still some problems, such as the format of the reference, as well as the standard writing of the author, the publishing house, and the order of time; At the same time, because this time is exactly the stage of everyone's post internship, it is recommended that students can add internship experience in related papers. . The final draft review has been modified several rounds of modifications, and the papers of each group have been complete and the content is fulfilling. However, there are still some format issues submitted, and the English translation of abstracts is not accurate. For the above issues, they all point out one by one that students are required to make the final modification and set the draft. At the same time, for the upcoming defense, give guidance, and urge students to prepare for the defense. 6. Defense summary 20xx on April 27th, Mr. Jiang Lingli, as a judge of Class 0932, organized 16 thesis groups, a total of 50 students to defense.答辩程序如下：rn 1.小组成员介绍：1分钟rn 2.组长阐述小组实践报告：3分钟(主要包括主题、论点、论据、结论以及文章的创新之处等) 3. Teacher question: 4 minutes (for a student practice report or his internship experience, the group members are jointly completed) Essence Based on the four aspects of speaking smoothness, whether the views, the clarity of the rules and the expression, and the inspection of the practice. Each group has successfully completed the defense in accordance with the requirements. Among them, Wang Jia, Zhao Qiong and Tang Hanlin performed well. Their title was "How to cultivate the good psychological quality of the flight attendants". The classmates have been hired by Hainan Airlines as flight attendants. Therefore, he combined his personal post experience and real cases as arguments to explain the importance of psychological quality and how to cultivate good psychological quality. The students also have the following problems during the defense process: the spoken language is not smooth enough, the grammatical errors are more; the focus of the explanation process is not prominent; there is no good combination with the practice. At present, all students have successfully passed the defense and made a successful answer to college life. One of the papers also received excellent papers, and three students nominated as excellent intern. The process of guiding thesis, as a instructor, I also gain a lot of knowledge. I have a more comprehensive understanding of professional knowledge, especially for the development of the industry and cutting -edge information. It has greatly promoted. This expansion: The graduation thesis instructor comments 1. The full text structure is basically reasonable and scientific, the logical thinking is clear, the view is accurate, the language is smooth, the demonstration method is more reasonable, the reference literature is in line with the theme requirements of the theme requirements From the theme to the content meets professional requirements, some of them are closely connected between the divisions, but the individual citations have not been marked. There are not many content that really belongs to its own innovation. The individual concepts are relatively vague. Generally, they meet the requirements of graduation thesis. 2. Research content is realistic and operable. Social hotspot issues in the topic of the topic are rigorous in logical structure. The point of view is clear and the discussion is comprehensive. The language is flat and simple, and it is easy to understand. In the process of argumentation, you can also combine the principles of professional knowledge with practical issues. But the argument is not enough. Overall meet the requirements of graduation thesis. 3. The topic selection is more aged and realistic. The full text structure arrangement is reasonable. Perspective expression is basically accurate. The full text is closely written by the requirements of administrative management, which fully reflects the characteristics of administrative management. A lot of relevant information. But the deficiencies are not much of their own innovation. Overall meet the requirements of graduation thesis. 4. Studying XXX as the title, fully reflects the characteristics of the times. It can provide reference value for the solution of China's administrative management issues. The full text structure is reasonable, the ideas are clear, and the viewpoints are obvious. In the process of argumentation, it can be taught to combine the argument with the case demonstration. The disadvantage is that the arguments of some arguments lack persuasion. 5. Study on the title of xxx. It can provide reference and reference for solving the problem of XXXX. In the full -text structure, we must first adjust the basic concept to ask questions, and then analyze the problem in depth, and finally make effective suggestions for a certain certain. The full text reflects professional characteristics, and some of them are closely connected with this division, and there are not many content that really belongs to its own innovation. Overall meet the requirements of graduation thesis. 6. The topic selection meets the goals of the training of administrative management, which can better use social theory and professional knowledge. The essay writing attitude is serious and responsible. The thesis content is sufficient, the relevant information of the reference is more sufficient, and the hierarchy is more reasonable. The main views are prominent, the logical views are clear, and the language expression is smooth. But the depth of the argument is not enough. 7. The topic selection of this article meets the requirements of administrative management, and fully reflects the needs of social reality. The full -text structure is reasonable, the ideas are clear, the view is correct, and can organically combine the knowledge of administrative management with the problems of analyzing and demonstration. The information checked in the process of writing is not only sufficient, but also closely combined with the theme. However, the format is not standardized, and the case demonstration is not enough. 8. This article is novel. The full text uses XXX as a clue, combined with the accuracy of various places to comprehensively analyze the problems and reasons of XXX. And propose countermeasures for the problem of existing problems. Content argumentation is also scientific and reasonable. The full text fully reflects the characteristics of administrative management and standardized format. But innovation is not enough. 9. This article meets professional requirements and reflects social hot issues. Therefore, the research of this theme is conducive to promoting the further development of my country's XXX. The full text first XXX problem, and then analyze the reasons for XXXX. On this basis, the relevant XXX is analyzed. The full text structure is appropriate, the ideas are clear, and the viewpoint is basically correct. 10. The thesis thinking is clear and the sentence is smooth. Can investigate the problems of XXXX. The author has a certain understanding and familiarity about the content of the paper. The thinking is clear, the level is clear, and the logical structure is reasonable. Viewpoint expression is accurate. The research principle is appropriate. In the process of argumentation, it can effectively combine professional principles with the topic to be studied. The views of individual and local arguments are not very clear, and generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis. 11. The full text is the title of xxx. Focus on discussing the problem of XXXX, and then make effective suggestions on the problem. The full -text structure meets the requirements, the logical thinking is clear, the argument is sufficient, the view is accurate, the language is smooth, and the argument method is reasonable. The reference information is closely combined with the theme. 12. The full text is the title of xxx. Focus on discussing the problems and reasons of XXXX, and then put forward some operable countermeasures for the problem. The topic selection is novel and has a strong research. The full -text structure meets the requirements, the logical structure is rigorous, the ideas are clear, the viewpoints are clear, and the arguments are strongly convincing. The method of argument is reasonable, and a large amount of data is demonstrated, and the reliability of the argument is added. Can comprehensively use the knowledge of administrative management to analyze XXXX, but the deficiencies are mainly the language is not very refined. 13. The literature reference of this article is fully and meets the needs of the topic. This article takes xxxx as an example, focusing on exploring XXXX. The topic selection of this article meets the requirements of administrative management, with complete structure, clear ideas, accurate views, standardized formats, and can better use the knowledge of administrative professional knowledge to analyze the practice of administrative management in reality. But individual views are not sufficient. Overall meet the requirements of graduation thesis. 14. The selection of this article has strong practicality, pertinence and practicality. Structural arrangements are scientific and reasonable, with clear ideas and clear levels. Each part is closely linked, the viewpoints are accurate, and the content of the argument is more convincing, but the article lacks its original content. 15. This article is based on XXXX, focusing on XXXX. The topic selection meets the goals and professional characteristics of the training of administrative management, and the topic selection has strong targeted and practical significance. The structure of the article is reasonable, the level is clear, the relevant literature and materials referenced during writing are closely linked to the theme, and the reference materials are relatively new. During the writing process, the author can better use the basic knowledge of administrative management majors to analyze the administrative XXX. In the process, theoretical argument and factual argument are mainly used. However, the shortcomings of the article are not clearly expressed with some statements, the demonstration is not deep enough, and the innovation points are not enough. Overall meet the requirements of graduation thesis. 16. The full text is based on XXX. The selection of topics has strong novelty and practicality. The full -text structure is scientific and reasonable, logical, clear, and clear -minded. The demonstration method is more reasonable. The content of the argument is more convincing. The analysis of the problem is thorough. In the process of argumentation, the student can also combine the principles of administrative professional expertise with social reality. Regardless of the topic and opinion demonstration, it meets the requirements of the training target of administrative management. But innovation is not enough. 17. This article is based on XXXX. First, the discussion of XXXX is first discussed, and then the reasons for the key analysis of XXX, and propose effective countermeasures for the reason for the reason. Therefore, the article is closely linked to the professional requirements in the selection of topics. The structure of the article is scientific and reasonable. The connection between part and part is very close, and case argumentation and case demonstration are used in the demonstration method. The information of the inspection is fully reasonable. The disadvantage of the problem of solving the problem is also lacking operability. 18. The theme of this article is XXXX, which fully reflects the social value of the times and reality. The full text is divided into XXX most. First discuss XX, and then analyze XXXX. The full text is basically closely linked to the theme. During the discussion, the student used the professional knowledge of administrative management to analyze and solve the XXXX problem. The language is smoother, but the viewpoint is not refined enough. In the process of argumentation, the theoretical demonstration method and practice demonstration method can be used just right. The view is accurate, the ideas are clear, and the article is strong. Overall meets the requirements for the training of administrative management. 19. The theme of XXX is the theme of this article. The selection of topics has strong practicality and applicationability and meets the requirements of administrative management. The structure of the paper is basically reasonable, and the full text is divided into most of XXX. The first part of XXXX, on the basis of this, focuses on discussing XXXX. In the process of argument, the student's reference and materials are closely combined with the views and content it to be demonstrated. The research methods used are mainly theoretical research and case research methods. The words are basically accurate. However, the main problems are that the arguments are not sufficient enough, and they lack persuasion. Individual citations have not indicated the source. 20. The theme of the thesis is clear, the sentence is basically smooth, the level is basically clear, and the viewing expression is basically accurate. The author is relatively good to analyze the basic principles of administrative management with Deng Xiaoping's ideas on administrative reform. The basic specifications of the format, the topic selection meets the requirements of administrative management majors, but there are too few literatures that are checked and reference. The combination of the content and the theme is not close, and there is a small problem with the logical structure. Generally speaking, the basic requirements of graduation thesis basically meet. 1. The topic selection is more eraable and realistic. The full -text structure arrangements are reasonable, the perspective is basically accurate, and the ideas are basically clear. However, the characteristics of administrative management are not enough, and there are not many things that belong to their own innovation. Overall meet the requirements of graduation thesis. 2. The title of official accountability system is based on the title of official accountability, which can provide reference and reference for solving the problems existing in the accountability system of Chinese officials. In the full text structure, first analyzed the basic principles of official accountability systems, and then analyzed the problems existing in the accountability system of Chinese officials, and finally made effective suggestions to solve the previous problems. The full text reflects professional characteristics, and some of them are closely connected with this division, and there are not many content that really belongs to its own innovation. Overall meet the requirements of graduation thesis. 3. The topic selection of this article meets the requirements of the training goals of administrative management. It can better comprehensively use administrative knowledge to analyze the issues of administrative management of the enterprise. The data comply with the needs of the topic, the hierarchical structure is reasonable, the main point of view is more clear, the logical thinking basically meets the requirements, and the language expression is basically smooth. But the depth of the argument is not enough, and the innovation points are insufficient. 24. The topic selection in this article is more reasonable and meets the requirements of administrative management. The full text is based on the theme of XXX to analyze and demonstrate. It has reference and reference significance for XXX, which improves my country's administrative management. The content demonstration is also more scientific and reasonable. The format is more standardized. The reference information is closely required by the theme of the article, but the innovation points are not enough and the argument is not enough. In particular, the last part of the article is too weak and lacks persuasive. Generally, the requirements of graduation thesis are basically reached. 25. This article is based on the theme of XXX, focusing on discussing the XXX problem. The selection of topics is basically in line with the scope of administrative management, which fully reflects professional characteristics. The full -text structure meets the requirements, the logical thinking is clear, the argument is sufficient, the viewpoint expression is accurate, the language is smooth, the demonstration method is more reasonable, but the innovation points are not enough, some opinion demonstrations are not sufficient, the format is not very standardized, and the true thinking does not really belong to its own thoughts. many. Basically qualified. 6. The selection of this article has strong practicality, pertinence and practicality. Structural arrangements are scientific and reasonable, with clear ideas and clear levels. The connection between each part is relatively close, the perspective is basically accurate, and the argument content is more convincing. In the process of demonstration, the basic problems in the text of administrative management majors are basically used to analyze the main problems in the text, but the reference materials are still not sufficient, the article lacks its original content, and a few viewing arguments are not profound and comprehensive. 7. The title of official accountability system is based on the title of official accountability, which can provide reference and reference for solving the problems existing in the accountability system of Chinese officials. In the full -text structure, first analyzed the practical significance of the official accountability system, and then analyzed the dilemma of the official accountability system of our country, and finally put forward effective suggestions to resolve difficulties. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, which meets the requirements of administrative management majors. The reference literature meets the needs of the thesis and themes. The practice demonstration is not enough, but there are not many content that really belongs to its own innovation. Overall meet the requirements of graduation thesis. 8. The thesis is clear, the sentence is basically smooth, the level is clear, and the viewpoint expression is accurate. The author is relatively good to analyze the basic principles of administrative management with the problem of intra -party supervision and practice. It is relatively close, but the viewpoints of some localities are not very clear and convincing. Generally, they meet the requirements of graduation thesis. Some of them are not very good in the combination of the theme. There is also a small problem with the logical structure. Generally speaking, the basic requirements of graduation thesis basically meet. ;
Summary of the guidance and defense work of the graduation thesis
The light is like an arrow, and the years have no traces. After a period of work, the work has ended. Looking back at the work of this time, the theoretical knowledge and business level have been greatly improved. Write work well. Summarize, learn lessons, and guide future work. In order to make you more simple and convenient to write a work summary, the following is the summary of my elaborate graduation thesis guidance and defense work for reference only. I hope to help everyone.
XX XX month, I undertook the guidance of graduation thesis and graduation practice report of 23 people in the 8th group of Class 0932. The overall process includes four steps:
1. Selection of graduation thesis, and press defense through the question;
2. Writing the first draft of the paper;
3. Amendment from the instructor, improve the paper and submit the dissertation and submit it Two drafts;
4. Follow the paper templates, adjust the format of thesis, further improve the content of the paper, and submit the final draft.
5. Defense
. The topic selection of thesis
Chat the guidance group and the student list, call the students to select the topic of the paper and the first submission of them for the first time. Understand the preliminary title selection intentions of each group. In order to avoid the same topics, adjust the topic questions similar to the topic, give suggestions, and fine -tune their propositions to make it more in line with the paradigm of thesis. For example, there are two groups of topics "how to become an excellent flight attendant". Some topics are too general, the scope is too large, and there is no targeted. The title is too general, and the second does not meet the paradigm of the paper. Under the guidance, it is adjusted to "the cause and countermeasure study of passenger complaints in aircraft cabin services". After determining the topic selection of each group, further clarify the schedules, framework writing, and data collection of their thesis writing. And collect students' contact information to determine the person in charge of the group to facilitate communication.
. Opening question guidance
Coffed on the topic, the students are preparing to open the question report, including the strict papers writing process and the outline of the paper. The thesis is rigorous, innovative, and has practical significance for students' future career development. The first time students wrote the paper and were not sure about the framework, there were many problems, such as unclear ideas and confused logic structure. For example: Passenger psychological problems and service path exploration caused by analysis flight delays are simply listed various reasons for flight delays, and there is no in -depth analysis and solution. Therefore, guiding students to change to
, The concept and case of flight delay
2. Analysis of the cause of flight delay
3. Features of passenger psychological problems caused by flight delay
4. Service path analysis of flight delay.
. The first draft was modified
After the question was opened, the members of each group collected and sorted the data, conducted research, and then analyzed, integrated data and data, and started to write the paper. Several important components of the text and references, the summary and the text are the core content.
The first draft modification is mainly for the following problems:
1. The writing of the abstract. Students do not know how to refine the summary, often mistakenly use it as an foreword, and ignore the refining of the theme of the full text.
2. The content is thin and the argument is not sufficient. Students' statement is simple, generally comes from theoretical knowledge, while there are few subjective logic ideas, without innovation and in -depth. For example, just give a case, lack of specific analysis of the case.
3. The structure is incomplete. Conclusion, reference and gratitude are the organic components of the paper, but many papers lack these parts.
The amendments to the fourth and second drafts
After being modified and improved, the students submitted the second draft of the paper, which was corrected to the problems previously pointed out. Framework and content logic are strong. However, there are still some problems, such as the format of the reference, as well as the standard writing of the author, the publishing house, and the order of time; At the same time, because this time is exactly the stage of everyone's post internship, it is recommended that students can add internship experience in related papers.
. The final draft review
has been modified several rounds of modifications, and the papers of each group have been complete and the content is fulfilling. However, there are still some format issues submitted, and the English translation of abstracts is not accurate. For the above issues, they all point out one by one that students are required to make the final modification and set the draft. At the same time, for the upcoming defense, give guidance, and urge students to prepare for the defense.
6. Defense summary
20xx on April 27th, Mr. Jiang Lingli, as a judge of Class 0932, organized 16 thesis groups, a total of 50 students to defense.答辩程序如下：rn 1.小组成员介绍：1分钟rn 2.组长阐述小组实践报告：3分钟(主要包括主题、论点、论据、结论以及文章的创新之处等)
3. Teacher question: 4 minutes (for a student practice report or his internship experience, the group members are jointly completed)
Essence Based on the four aspects of speaking smoothness, whether the views, the clarity of the rules and the expression, and the inspection of the practice. Each group has successfully completed the defense in accordance with the requirements. Among them, Wang Jia, Zhao Qiong and Tang Hanlin performed well. Their title was "How to cultivate the good psychological quality of the flight attendants". The classmates have been hired by Hainan Airlines as flight attendants. Therefore, he combined his personal post experience and real cases as arguments to explain the importance of psychological quality and how to cultivate good psychological quality. The students also have the following problems during the defense process: the spoken language is not smooth enough, the grammatical errors are more; the focus of the explanation process is not prominent; there is no good combination with the practice.
At present, all students have successfully passed the defense and made a successful answer to college life. One of the papers also received excellent papers, and three students nominated as excellent intern. The process of guiding thesis, as a instructor, I also gain a lot of knowledge. I have a more comprehensive understanding of professional knowledge, especially for the development of the industry and cutting -edge information. It has greatly promoted.
This expansion:
The graduation thesis instructor comments
1. The full text structure is basically reasonable and scientific, the logical thinking is clear, the view is accurate, the language is smooth, the demonstration method is more reasonable, the reference literature is in line with the theme requirements of the theme requirements From the theme to the content meets professional requirements, some of them are closely connected between the divisions, but the individual citations have not been marked. There are not many content that really belongs to its own innovation. The individual concepts are relatively vague. Generally, they meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
2. Research content is realistic and operable. Social hotspot issues in the topic of the topic are rigorous in logical structure. The point of view is clear and the discussion is comprehensive. The language is flat and simple, and it is easy to understand. In the process of argumentation, you can also combine the principles of professional knowledge with practical issues. But the argument is not enough. Overall meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
3. The topic selection is more aged and realistic. The full text structure arrangement is reasonable. Perspective expression is basically accurate. The full text is closely written by the requirements of administrative management, which fully reflects the characteristics of administrative management. A lot of relevant information. But the deficiencies are not much of their own innovation. Overall meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
4. Studying XXX as the title, fully reflects the characteristics of the times. It can provide reference value for the solution of China's administrative management issues. The full text structure is reasonable, the ideas are clear, and the viewpoints are obvious. In the process of argumentation, it can be taught to combine the argument with the case demonstration. The disadvantage is that the arguments of some arguments lack persuasion.
5. Study on the title of xxx. It can provide reference and reference for solving the problem of XXXX. In the full -text structure, we must first adjust the basic concept to ask questions, and then analyze the problem in depth, and finally make effective suggestions for a certain certain. The full text reflects professional characteristics, and some of them are closely connected with this division, and there are not many content that really belongs to its own innovation. Overall meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
6. The topic selection meets the goals of the training of administrative management, which can better use social theory and professional knowledge. The essay writing attitude is serious and responsible. The thesis content is sufficient, the relevant information of the reference is more sufficient, and the hierarchy is more reasonable. The main views are prominent, the logical views are clear, and the language expression is smooth. But the depth of the argument is not enough.
7. The topic selection of this article meets the requirements of administrative management, and fully reflects the needs of social reality. The full -text structure is reasonable, the ideas are clear, the view is correct, and can organically combine the knowledge of administrative management with the problems of analyzing and demonstration. The information checked in the process of writing is not only sufficient, but also closely combined with the theme. However, the format is not standardized, and the case demonstration is not enough.
8. This article is novel. The full text uses XXX as a clue, combined with the accuracy of various places to comprehensively analyze the problems and reasons of XXX. And propose countermeasures for the problem of existing problems. Content argumentation is also scientific and reasonable. The full text fully reflects the characteristics of administrative management and standardized format. But innovation is not enough.
9. This article meets professional requirements and reflects social hot issues. Therefore, the research of this theme is conducive to promoting the further development of my country's XXX. The full text first XXX problem, and then analyze the reasons for XXXX. On this basis, the relevant XXX is analyzed. The full text structure is appropriate, the ideas are clear, and the viewpoint is basically correct.
10. The thesis thinking is clear and the sentence is smooth. Can investigate the problems of XXXX. The author has a certain understanding and familiarity about the content of the paper. The thinking is clear, the level is clear, and the logical structure is reasonable. Viewpoint expression is accurate. The research principle is appropriate. In the process of argumentation, it can effectively combine professional principles with the topic to be studied. The views of individual and local arguments are not very clear, and generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
11. The full text is the title of xxx. Focus on discussing the problem of XXXX, and then make effective suggestions on the problem. The full -text structure meets the requirements, the logical thinking is clear, the argument is sufficient, the view is accurate, the language is smooth, and the argument method is reasonable. The reference information is closely combined with the theme.
12. The full text is the title of xxx. Focus on discussing the problems and reasons of XXXX, and then put forward some operable countermeasures for the problem. The topic selection is novel and has a strong research. The full -text structure meets the requirements, the logical structure is rigorous, the ideas are clear, the viewpoints are clear, and the arguments are strongly convincing. The method of argument is reasonable, and a large amount of data is demonstrated, and the reliability of the argument is added. Can comprehensively use the knowledge of administrative management to analyze XXXX, but the deficiencies are mainly the language is not very refined.
13. The literature reference of this article is fully and meets the needs of the topic. This article takes xxxx as an example, focusing on exploring XXXX. The topic selection of this article meets the requirements of administrative management, with complete structure, clear ideas, accurate views, standardized formats, and can better use the knowledge of administrative professional knowledge to analyze the practice of administrative management in reality. But individual views are not sufficient. Overall meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
14. The selection of this article has strong practicality, pertinence and practicality. Structural arrangements are scientific and reasonable, with clear ideas and clear levels. Each part is closely linked, the viewpoints are accurate, and the content of the argument is more convincing, but the article lacks its original content.
15. This article is based on XXXX, focusing on XXXX. The topic selection meets the goals and professional characteristics of the training of administrative management, and the topic selection has strong targeted and practical significance. The structure of the article is reasonable, the level is clear, the relevant literature and materials referenced during writing are closely linked to the theme, and the reference materials are relatively new. During the writing process, the author can better use the basic knowledge of administrative management majors to analyze the administrative XXX. In the process, theoretical argument and factual argument are mainly used. However, the shortcomings of the article are not clearly expressed with some statements, the demonstration is not deep enough, and the innovation points are not enough. Overall meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
16. The full text is based on XXX. The selection of topics has strong novelty and practicality. The full -text structure is scientific and reasonable, logical, clear, and clear -minded. The demonstration method is more reasonable. The content of the argument is more convincing. The analysis of the problem is thorough. In the process of argumentation, the student can also combine the principles of administrative professional expertise with social reality. Regardless of the topic and opinion demonstration, it meets the requirements of the training target of administrative management. But innovation is not enough.
17. This article is based on XXXX. First, the discussion of XXXX is first discussed, and then the reasons for the key analysis of XXX, and propose effective countermeasures for the reason for the reason. Therefore, the article is closely linked to the professional requirements in the selection of topics. The structure of the article is scientific and reasonable. The connection between part and part is very close, and case argumentation and case demonstration are used in the demonstration method. The information of the inspection is fully reasonable. The disadvantage of the problem of solving the problem is also lacking operability.
18. The theme of this article is XXXX, which fully reflects the social value of the times and reality. The full text is divided into XXX most. First discuss XX, and then analyze XXXX. The full text is basically closely linked to the theme. During the discussion, the student used the professional knowledge of administrative management to analyze and solve the XXXX problem. The language is smoother, but the viewpoint is not refined enough. In the process of argumentation, the theoretical demonstration method and practice demonstration method can be used just right. The view is accurate, the ideas are clear, and the article is strong. Overall meets the requirements for the training of administrative management.
19. The theme of XXX is the theme of this article. The selection of topics has strong practicality and applicationability and meets the requirements of administrative management. The structure of the paper is basically reasonable, and the full text is divided into most of XXX. The first part of XXXX, on the basis of this, focuses on discussing XXXX. In the process of argument, the student's reference and materials are closely combined with the views and content it to be demonstrated. The research methods used are mainly theoretical research and case research methods. The words are basically accurate. However, the main problems are that the arguments are not sufficient enough, and they lack persuasion. Individual citations have not indicated the source.
20. The theme of the thesis is clear, the sentence is basically smooth, the level is basically clear, and the viewing expression is basically accurate. The author is relatively good to analyze the basic principles of administrative management with Deng Xiaoping's ideas on administrative reform. The basic specifications of the format, the topic selection meets the requirements of administrative management majors, but there are too few literatures that are checked and reference. The combination of the content and the theme is not close, and there is a small problem with the logical structure. Generally speaking, the basic requirements of graduation thesis basically meet.
1. The topic selection is more eraable and realistic. The full -text structure arrangements are reasonable, the perspective is basically accurate, and the ideas are basically clear. However, the characteristics of administrative management are not enough, and there are not many things that belong to their own innovation. Overall meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
2. The title of official accountability system is based on the title of official accountability, which can provide reference and reference for solving the problems existing in the accountability system of Chinese officials. In the full text structure, first analyzed the basic principles of official accountability systems, and then analyzed the problems existing in the accountability system of Chinese officials, and finally made effective suggestions to solve the previous problems. The full text reflects professional characteristics, and some of them are closely connected with this division, and there are not many content that really belongs to its own innovation. Overall meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
3. The topic selection of this article meets the requirements of the training goals of administrative management. It can better comprehensively use administrative knowledge to analyze the issues of administrative management of the enterprise. The data comply with the needs of the topic, the hierarchical structure is reasonable, the main point of view is more clear, the logical thinking basically meets the requirements, and the language expression is basically smooth. But the depth of the argument is not enough, and the innovation points are insufficient.
24. The topic selection in this article is more reasonable and meets the requirements of administrative management. The full text is based on the theme of XXX to analyze and demonstrate. It has reference and reference significance for XXX, which improves my country's administrative management. The content demonstration is also more scientific and reasonable. The format is more standardized. The reference information is closely required by the theme of the article, but the innovation points are not enough and the argument is not enough. In particular, the last part of the article is too weak and lacks persuasive. Generally, the requirements of graduation thesis are basically reached.
25. This article is based on the theme of XXX, focusing on discussing the XXX problem. The selection of topics is basically in line with the scope of administrative management, which fully reflects professional characteristics. The full -text structure meets the requirements, the logical thinking is clear, the argument is sufficient, the viewpoint expression is accurate, the language is smooth, the demonstration method is more reasonable, but the innovation points are not enough, some opinion demonstrations are not sufficient, the format is not very standardized, and the true thinking does not really belong to its own thoughts. many. Basically qualified.
6. The selection of this article has strong practicality, pertinence and practicality. Structural arrangements are scientific and reasonable, with clear ideas and clear levels. The connection between each part is relatively close, the perspective is basically accurate, and the argument content is more convincing. In the process of demonstration, the basic problems in the text of administrative management majors are basically used to analyze the main problems in the text, but the reference materials are still not sufficient, the article lacks its original content, and a few viewing arguments are not profound and comprehensive.
7. The title of official accountability system is based on the title of official accountability, which can provide reference and reference for solving the problems existing in the accountability system of Chinese officials. In the full -text structure, first analyzed the practical significance of the official accountability system, and then analyzed the dilemma of the official accountability system of our country, and finally put forward effective suggestions to resolve difficulties. The full text reflects the requirements of professional characteristics, which meets the requirements of administrative management majors. The reference literature meets the needs of the thesis and themes. The practice demonstration is not enough, but there are not many content that really belongs to its own innovation. Overall meet the requirements of graduation thesis.
8. The thesis is clear, the sentence is basically smooth, the level is clear, and the viewpoint expression is accurate. The author is relatively good to analyze the basic principles of administrative management with the problem of intra -party supervision and practice. It is relatively close, but the viewpoints of some localities are not very clear and convincing. Generally, they meet the requirements of graduation thesis. Some of them are not very good in the combination of the theme. There is also a small problem with the logical structure. Generally speaking, the basic requirements of graduation thesis basically meet.
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